Absolutely fantastic guys.You should all feel really proud of yourselves. If you think back to the dark days just before half term when you were struggling to come up with a story. It has been a challenging journey, at times, soul destroying, but your determination to succeed has never wavered and your rewards will be huge. I will e mail your review later or early tomorrow morning. If you want any help tomorrow, find me in P4 or support. Well done.
Well done, all of you. There are so many great things about your film.
We have awarded you 38 out of 40. Fantastic. We feel that it is easy for you to make up the lost two marks by making one small simple ammendment to the start of the film. Our one niggling doubt about the film is that the Mother is clearly not her mother - it would be a genetic impossibility. Our suggestion is as follows :0 1. Message CU saying missing you, but a name (of her sister) 2. To ensure we know it is her sister, we would suggest a further addition of one dialogue foley - "Miss you Sis" or something of the like.
Both require that you can shoot anywhere. Sound dialogue acan also be added anywhere,
Did this come up in your feedback, that the Mother wasn't convincing (re age). With this, you can get full marks as it is such a good piece of work. An hour of work?
POSTER Touch is not a British magazine as far as we know. Change it to something else upmarket like "TIME OUT"? - At present 9 out of 10. Make the change and should go to 10.
Absolutely fantastic guys.You should all feel really proud of yourselves. If you think back to the dark days just before half term when you were struggling to come up with a story. It has been a challenging journey, at times, soul destroying, but your determination to succeed has never wavered and your rewards will be huge. I will e mail your review later or early tomorrow morning. If you want any help tomorrow, find me in P4 or support. Well done.
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ReplyDeleteWell done, all of you. There are so many great things about your film.
ReplyDeleteWe have awarded you 38 out of 40. Fantastic. We feel that it is easy for you to make up the lost two marks by making one small simple ammendment to the start of the film. Our one niggling doubt about the film is that the Mother is clearly not her mother - it would be a genetic impossibility. Our suggestion is as follows :0
1. Message CU saying missing you, but a name (of her sister)
2. To ensure we know it is her sister, we would suggest a further addition of one dialogue foley - "Miss you Sis" or something of the like.
Both require that you can shoot anywhere. Sound dialogue acan also be added anywhere,
Did this come up in your feedback, that the Mother wasn't convincing (re age). With this, you can get full marks as it is such a good piece of work. An hour of work?
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Touch is not a British magazine as far as we know. Change it to something else upmarket like "TIME OUT"? - At present 9 out of 10. Make the change and should go to 10.