- Due to audience feedback on our casting of the character Louise's mother not being convincing we have made a slight change to our film. We have changed the character to Louise's sister as she fits the age better, we did this by editing the shot of the note on the flowers to just say 'Miss you x' rather than 'miss you, mum x' and also recorded a voice over of our character saying 'miss you sis' to further suggest to the audience the significance of this character, Louise's sister. We feel this makes our film less confusing and more convincing to the audience as our actor was too young to be playing her mother.
POSTER
- We have made a change to one of the reviews, changing it to 'Time Out' as this is more upmarket and appropriate for our audience.
REVIEW
- We have changed our review slightly by aligning our text up to the same place and made our drop capital at the beginning fit with the text by reducing its font size from 12 to 10.
I have had a quick look at your review - there is one little error - the drop capital at the beginning needs the top of the letter to be in line with the top of the first line. In total 3 lines in depth.
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